Yes, that shaving the mouth thing was cringe worthy. As was the camera work and sad attempt at story.
Yea I thought the camera work at the beginning was really cheesy. As for the story ,yeah there wasn't much of one but hey its a music video so thats not too surprising.
Going along with the no story structure, I recently finished adding sound to footage I've had lying around for a while. I shot it on 16mm film around november last year. I was only given 100 feet to work with so instead of a story I tried to do something else and just fuck around visually and essentially just experiment. Play it really loud. Ohh yeah and full screen it. EPILEPSY WARNING: you also shouldn't watch it if you have Photo Sensitive Epilepsy.