Should Brokendoll be banned?

[Suffacated]

You forgot to wish us to die.
But I'm sure that deep inside of your warped Mormon mind
you still do.
Not to worry...
I still forgive you...

[TomAz]

[John Peel is My Co-pilot]

I think the final word on this topic needs to come from, oooh, I don't know, a pic of a cute kitten that's been humorously altered by Photoshop with some pithy phrase attached.

Now if only that were possible...

[BROKENDOLL]

I can't believe it's come to this...

[PotVsKtl]

[ShyGuy75]

PotV, I knew there had to be a reason you were here

[captncrzy]

That kid is gonna be in therapy for years

[betao]

That kid is gonna be in therapy for years

IM gonna be in therapy for years after watching that!

[BROKENDOLL]

After this damn thread, I may consider alittle therapy myself...

[J~$$$]

What are multies?
Multi is short for “multi-syllable rhyme.” Multies are phrases in which more than one syllable rhymes. Multies can be double, triple, quadruple (etc…) rhymes.

Normal rhyme: cat / hat
Multi rhyme: my cat / hi-hat
Or a longer multi: bit my cat / hit the hi-hat

Southern rapper Ludacris loves featuring multies in his verses. Luda has a trademark delivery, in which he slows down and emphasizes the end of each line. This delivery works well when he slips in some clever multies.

I’m never going nowhere, so don’t try me,
my music sticks in fans’ veins like an I.V.

In the example from the track Number One Spot, Luadacris creates a multi with “try me” and “I.V.” He could have just rhymed “me” with “V.”, but by rhyming with the additional syllables (try with I) it becomes a multi.

What’s the difference between multies and in-rhymes?

In-rhymes:
Don’t be silly cover your milli I’m like Billy
Don’t be dumb cover your gun I ain’t fun
- Dizee Rascal, “Stand Up Tall”

Multies:
Punchlines that kill… my hits’ll bury ya,
I rap to myself on the bus like… schizophrenia

Why should I use multies?
Multies are hallmarks of all the dopest flows, and all the best rappers use them. They are more complex and more impressive than normal rhymes and so command a lot more respect. Multies add variation to your verse and will help you craft better rhymes.

How do I write multies?
Multies aren’t that much harder to write than typical rhymes, they just take more time. Step one is to find a line that you want to start with. Take this line for example:

The elite force like army rangers and navy seals,

Now we’re going to create a multi with “navy seals.” The first thing you want to do is list all the words that rhyme with “navy”. The easiest way to do this is by using a rhyme dictionary (rhymezone.com) and listing the results, but keep in mind that this will only give you the ‘perfect’ rhymes, not the slant rhymes. Slant rhymes are very important, because they allow you to write more creative lines. This is especially true when you’re writing multies, ‘cause otherwise your lines might come out contrived and stupid. The other problem with rhyming dictionaries is that they do the work for you. If you take the time to actually think for yourself of all the rhymes for the word, you’re more likely to get those rhymes in your head for future freestyles. I don’t recommend rhyme dictionaries unless you’re really stuck.

Perfect rhymes for navy:
gravy
wavy

Slant rhymes for navy:
maybe
baby
lady
rabies
weighty
etc…

Then repeat this process for the second word, in this case, “seals.”

Perfect rhymes with seals:
deals
eels
feels
heels
meals
peels
reels
squeals
steals
wheels

Slant rhymes for seals:
stales
whales
beans
etc…

Now we go through the process of linking up navy-rhymes with seals-rhymes. There are lots of combinations, so try to pick some that make some sense:

Baby meals
Wavy eels
Lady squeals
Gravy feels
Weighty whales

Then we pick one and write a line that makes sense:

I kick it operatic ‘til that fat lady squeals
or
your lyrics are stuffing, so now I know how gravy feels
or
I’ll call you Gerber cuz ya spittin’ up some baby meals

Write a bunch of them, and then pick the one that you like best to use. Or use a bunch of them in a row like this:

The elite force like army rangers and navy seals,
I kick it operatic ‘til that fat lady squeals
your lyrics are stuffing, now I know how gravy feels,
I’ll call you Gerber cuz ya spittin’ up some baby meals

That’s the simplest way to write multies. If you master that simple technique, you should already notice your lyrical skills improving.

[BROKENDOLL]

I think the final word on this topic needs to come from, oooh, I don't know, a pic of a cute kitten that's been humorously altered by Photoshop with some pithy phrase attached.

Now if only that were possible...

[BROKENDOLL]

On this board, anything's possible!

[BROKENDOLL]

Dammit, would somebody please comment on the fine job I did making my own LOL cat?

[J~$$$]

Its almost as retarded as you.

[thelastgreatman]

Comment requested, FACE DELIVERED.

[miscorrections]

Jesus SHUT UP with your stupid FACE. It's not clever and when you use it in every other post it makes me want to punch you in your ovaries.

[BROKENDOLL]

I imagine since thelastgreatman has no balls, I can accept the fact that he has ovaries.

[gaypalmsprings]

[kreutz2112]

ovaries are womans balls.

[BROKENDOLL]

And mine are bigger then thelastgreatman's.

[Ill_Eagle]

I just threw up all over the fucking keyboard.

[BROKENDOLL]

Which ones did you eat?

[BROKENDOLL]

Wow, that was disgusting, wasn't it? For someone trying not to get my ass banned, I will be more conscientious in posting next time.

[Neighborhood Creep]

[algunz]

Shouldn't that be in the annoying Facebook posts thread?

[heart cooks brain]

RIP J$$$$

[bmack86]

tubesock shakur

[heart cooks brain]

oh i thought that was someone else.

whose grave am i standing on?

[canexplain]

Ah, the good ole' dayz...... cr****

[suprefan]

How is not just a statement