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NoGwenPlease
01-14-2010, 02:43 PM
The song I originally posted did suck.

Maybe so does all of it.


I don't find this song to be boring, or dull, contrived.. etc:

http://soundcloud.com/everythingmusic/dir

If you guys don't like this, perhaps we just like different music?

I love that I get called boring but daft punk replays the same 8 bar loop for 3 minutes and are called hall of fame gods.

PotVsKtl
01-14-2010, 02:52 PM
TLcage21lvc

BlackSwan
01-14-2010, 02:55 PM
Stupid people using stupid computers.

NoGwenPlease
01-14-2010, 03:22 PM
TLcage21lvc
soooo.. it's terrible.. got it.

i'm pretty confident in the rest of the songs, I'd say listen to "Elevator Music" before posting vomit.

PotVsKtl
01-14-2010, 03:27 PM
1gW2bBEk5Vs

york707
01-14-2010, 03:33 PM
Why would you post something like that on here if you didn't have the fortitude to take (the completely predictable) responses it was bound to generate?

NoGwenPlease
01-14-2010, 03:45 PM
Why would you post something like that on here if you didn't have the fortitude to take (the completely predictable) responses it was bound to generate?
How exactly am I taking it badly?

I'm thankful for the vomit.. I'll just work on the song longer...

PotVsKtl
01-14-2010, 03:47 PM
The beats are boring. That's my constructive criticism.

york707
01-14-2010, 03:54 PM
How exactly am I taking it badly?


this is how:


I'm thankful for the vomit.. I'll just work on the song longer...

without even have listened to it, I can say that your desire to change the song or work on it longer based on pot's videos shows an oddly placed sense of priorities.

J~$$$$
01-14-2010, 04:29 PM
This is the coolest song I have ever heard. Tell me more.

york707
01-14-2010, 04:40 PM
^See? Now you CAN'T change it. It's perfect!

caco0283
01-14-2010, 04:43 PM
im predicting to hear this song in the Sahara in two years

fatbastard
01-14-2010, 04:43 PM
I can make a song with my armpit that sounds better than yours.

caco0283
01-14-2010, 04:48 PM
i bet you cant

BROKENDOLL
01-14-2010, 04:49 PM
Will you guys check it out? I just want listens.. nothing more, nothing less :)

http://soundcloud.com/everythingmusic/release


if you like this song.. check out the rest.. they're pretty outthere
Damn, these guys are rough! I listened to part of the first one and then part of your recommended "Elevator Music." Maybe I didn't listen long enough, but I don't feel like puking over it.

PotVsKtl
01-14-2010, 04:50 PM
Sure, but how does it compare to Disturbed?

NoGwenPlease
01-14-2010, 04:50 PM
i bet you cant
I'm with this guy.. I bet you can't.

To reply, I was looking for actual constructive criticism.. I think it has some potential, I was hoping someone would say something specific. If all I get is vomit and "beats are boring" then I'll work harder on my shit.

caco0283
01-14-2010, 04:50 PM
I would take the vomit video over a compliment from brokendoll

BROKENDOLL
01-14-2010, 04:51 PM
I wonder if any of my videos would cause nauseousness?

BROKENDOLL
01-14-2010, 04:51 PM
Anyone have a video camera handy?

fatbastard
01-14-2010, 04:51 PM
i bet you cant

You got me. My pits are dry. However, I ate chinese food for lunch. I can do a butt trumpet solo at least as good as that song.

NoGwenPlease
01-14-2010, 04:53 PM
Sure, but how does it compare to Disturbed?
Listen to this: http://soundcloud.com/everythingmusic/drm

and tell me I'm not better than disturbed. Honestly.

BROKENDOLL
01-14-2010, 04:56 PM
You got me. My pits are dry. However, I ate chinese food for lunch. I can do a butt trumpet solo at least as good as that song.
You and suffacated need to meetup someday....His butt solos could use a dash of brass in them.

MassonaBlackEyes
01-14-2010, 05:01 PM
This shit is terrible, please stop with the music nogwen

york707
01-14-2010, 05:02 PM
I would take the vomit video over a compliment from brokendoll

QFT

BROKENDOLL
01-14-2010, 05:03 PM
Sure, but how does it compare to Disturbed?
Well, first I was gonna say something to the effect that Disturbed makes me feel rambunctiously (<?) aggressive, like throwing elbows, and this music makes me want to like, rub elbows, but...

Listen to this: http://soundcloud.com/everythingmusic/drm

and tell me I'm not better than disturbed. Honestly.
Honestly? Now I feel like jabbing pencils in my ears.


Actually it reminded me of me playing with my metronome when I'm stoned.

wmgaretjax
01-14-2010, 05:05 PM
beyond the beats being boring, the sound design and synths are all canned and entirely uninteresting.

Alchemy
01-14-2010, 05:07 PM
I listened to "Release" and "Elevator Music." It's not bad and not puke worthy, but with so little going on in terms of melodies and sounds (generic pads and synths, your basic arpeggios, and repetitive patterns), then I do think you need to do a lot more with the beats. Put more variation into the beats and experiment with some noises.

MassonaBlackEyes
01-14-2010, 05:07 PM
beyond the beats being boring, the sound design and synths are all canned and entirely uninteresting.

that song sounds like a demo on the korg sampler the beige one i forget the the model

TomAz
01-14-2010, 05:13 PM
this song is pretty dull. it sounds like you've just figured out how to make a song, and you're proud because you didn't used to be able to make a song, and now you do. Which, you know, is real progress, so congratulations. Next step: figure out how to make a song that's not boring.

SoulDischarge
01-14-2010, 05:16 PM
I made a song that sounds like your mother's uterus getting eating by robotic aardvarks. Plz listen & rate. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GPbuC8iqP74)

DJdharma
01-14-2010, 05:19 PM
What did you create these songs with? Hardware/software.

fatbastard
01-14-2010, 05:22 PM
The page has been taken down, just as I was starting to feel really bad for the person who created it. Remix?

DJdharma
01-14-2010, 05:24 PM
I made a song that sounds like your mother's uterus getting eating by robotic aardvarks. Plz listen & rate. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GPbuC8iqP74)

That reminds me of Throbbing Gristle.

NoGwenPlease
01-14-2010, 05:24 PM
The page has been taken down, just as I was starting to feel really bad for the person who created it. Remix?
I thought it was good, after review, i feel like jumping off a bridge...

I can't really find too much wrong with this one though: http://soundcloud.com/everythingmusic/dir

if you're feeling at all sorry for me.. listen to the whole thing.. there's a build-up you can't get to with only listening for 30 seconds..

NoGwenPlease
01-14-2010, 05:27 PM
What did you create these songs with? Hardware/software.
Apple iMac 2.4ghz
NI Audio Kontrol (had to get a cheaper audio interface because my apogee died and I'm out of work)
M-Audio bx5a's
Logic Pro 8
sounds from the web, NI, Motu, East/West

J~$$$$
01-14-2010, 05:39 PM
Omg this is the greatest thing I have ever heard. My dick is so hard right now.

thewindowliquor
01-14-2010, 05:45 PM
http://mikejonesaudio.com/Look_Out_2.mp3

york707
01-14-2010, 06:48 PM
Look, dude, there are a ton of musicians amongst the regulars and not-so-regulars here. Most don't post their stuff. Some do. If you spent more than three seconds reading anything that's ever been typed on this board, you would have known with 100% accuracy that this is the response you were going to get.

You have started to get some honest feedback, and if you can't take that, why in the fuck did you post?

MassonaBlackEyes
01-14-2010, 07:54 PM
I made a song that sounds like your mother's uterus getting eating by robotic aardvarks. Plz listen & rate. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GPbuC8iqP74)

is that you?

DJdharma
01-14-2010, 10:40 PM
Apple iMac 2.4ghz
NI Audio Kontrol (had to get a cheaper audio interface because my apogee died and I'm out of work)
M-Audio bx5a's
Logic Pro 8
sounds from the web, NI, Motu, East/West

I think you would like this thread...

http://www.coachella.com/forum/showthread.php?t=23428

NoGwenPlease
01-14-2010, 11:28 PM
I think you would like this thread...

http://www.coachella.com/forum/showthread.php?t=23428
Thanks man :)

Yablonowitz
01-15-2010, 08:46 AM
I'll tell you this, the sound wave pattern looks like a porcupine stuffing its snout into the ass of another porcupine. So I hope you use porcupine (or some variation) in your title.

schoolofruckus
01-15-2010, 08:52 AM
Some people make great music. Other people create great message board threads. We all have our talents.

sonofhal
01-15-2010, 09:02 AM
I made a little brown fish.

caco0283
01-15-2010, 09:04 AM
Some people make great music. Other people create great message board threads. We all have our talents.

Whats your talent Gabe?? Being white?

superfiction
01-15-2010, 09:08 AM
most boring predictable chord progression ever. wait i mean bassline cuz you dont have chords. shitty as boring beat. this blows asshole

Yablonowitz
01-15-2010, 09:11 AM
most boring predictable chord progression ever. wait i mean bassline cuz you dont have chords. shitty as boring beat. this blows asshole

Well now I'm thinking he must be doing something right.

superfiction
01-15-2010, 09:14 AM
since when do you disapprove of my music tastes

adamnikyo
01-15-2010, 10:04 AM
Hey, do you mind if I share some of my stuff in here too? I just finished this track two days ago. It's pretty sick. I don't mean to one up you or anything, though.
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/15486/ElectroAh.mp3




EDIT: Yes, that's me on guitar. *Blushes*

caco0283
01-15-2010, 10:10 AM
ADAM!!!

adamnikyo
01-15-2010, 10:16 AM
RONNIE!!!

caco0283
01-15-2010, 10:18 AM
Well I screamed your name for two reason....A) nice to see you B) my speakers were turned up loud

adamnikyo
01-15-2010, 10:21 AM
Are you saying my song was too loud?

caco0283
01-15-2010, 10:25 AM
I love your song....it reminded me to keep things in perspective

york707
01-15-2010, 10:30 AM
fuck, yablo, gabe and adam all appear within a week.

PotVsKtl
01-15-2010, 10:33 AM
Whats your talent Gabe?? Being white?

He's not even particularly white. Go fish.

adamnikyo
01-15-2010, 10:47 AM
fuck, yablo, gabe and adam all appear within a week.

fuck is the best.

york707
01-15-2010, 07:04 PM
And now Jack in another thread....