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omg wtf bbq
02-19-2007, 03:39 AM
advice/tips/etc.

what'd yall think?
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7641/lab2007frontyg1.jpg
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/4408/lab2007backob5.jpg

Stefinitely Maybe
02-19-2007, 05:23 AM
I'm busy that day, sorry - my band is playing a gig.

Also, you shouldn't put "Email us @" and then the email address. The two @s make things confusing.

UnicornsForBreakfast
02-19-2007, 05:38 AM
I think you could do without the "designed by", other than that..uh...odd concept?

TomAz
02-19-2007, 05:43 AM
it's Chartres St., not Rd., and what is it? a party under the freeway?

and the way that DJ is sitting, and facing, it looks like he's looking at the pics of the playmates and, umm, taking care of his own business.

RATMan
02-19-2007, 05:43 AM
Capitalize TX
Get a new photo of the DJ
Turn the apostrophe in Life's right side up
Don't us "special" twice

Other than that, rockin' poster

york707
02-19-2007, 06:15 AM
That apostrophe is wrong.

All That I Am
02-19-2007, 06:23 AM
There's a six between LIFE and S!

If you're using someone Famous put their damn pic in front of the flyer. It looks like a palm tree with an ass or a parapalegic girl.

Is this a fetish ball?

fober
02-19-2007, 08:21 AM
LESS COWBELL

Courtney
02-19-2007, 08:29 AM
Nice graphic design work. I agree with the above suggestions:
1) flip the apostrophe in "life's a beach"
2) "designed by pedro" could be in smaller type, or perhaps a color that doesn't pop so much that it distracts you from the main message of the flyer
3) get a new DJ photo
4) change the wording for "e-mail us @ blahblah@yahoo.com"

Also, I'm not sure what "senior mens 2007" is, but should it be capitalized? Should it have an apostrophe in "mens"?

All minor stuff. Otherwise, nice work.

TomAz
02-19-2007, 09:01 AM
And change "Rd" to "St" dammit!

airguitarvet
02-19-2007, 09:44 AM
add more bitches in the pics!

fatbastard
02-19-2007, 09:44 AM
You may want to go to the old message board and look at last year's submissions. Your a long way from being competitive. I wish you luck.

amyzzz
02-19-2007, 10:17 AM
Lose all the @ signs except for the one in your email address.

omg wtf bbq
02-19-2007, 11:58 AM
You may want to go to the old message board and look at last year's submissions. Your a long way from being competitive. I wish you luck.

submissions for what?
i dont want to compete.

Molecule
02-19-2007, 12:27 PM
Definitely a better picture for the dj, he looks particularly bad next to the glam shots of the "special guests." Also, am I the only one who thinks it's weird to have more playmates than djs in attendance? Unless they also spin records.

fortydollarsworthofmeat
02-19-2007, 12:38 PM
i don't particularly care for it, to be honest. there are several factors that make it look dated, and not in a good way.

if you're going for something to look a little beachy-retro with that sort of color scheme, how about something like this:

http://www.swallowedthefly.com/bs/beach.jpg

omg wtf bbq
02-19-2007, 02:12 PM
thats waaay cool!

heres the new version
new version
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4480/lab2007backv2oy9.jpg
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/3476/lab2007frontv2rr8.jpg

crazzz2007
02-19-2007, 02:34 PM
i don't particularly care for it, to be honest. there are several factors that make it look dated, and not in a good way.

if you're going for something to look a little beachy-retro with that sort of color scheme, how about something like this:

http://www.swallowedthefly.com/bs/beach.jpg

sorry, but that image is horrible.....the chick looks like she's covered in fur

menikmati
02-19-2007, 02:47 PM
submissions for what?
i dont want to compete.

I think he was talking about the festival contest. You are still competing in that right?

fortydollarsworthofmeat
02-19-2007, 08:04 PM
sorry, but that image is horrible.....the chick looks like she's covered in fur

i can't even begin to think of how you see fur.

SojuGorae
02-19-2007, 08:05 PM
fur burgers?

fortydollarsworthofmeat
02-19-2007, 08:08 PM
omgwtfbbq: i think it's better, but i think the text going every which way makes it hard to read. if you have to put it on an angle, fine, but put it all on the same angle. i had to twist my head like four different ways to read all the text and look at the pictures, and most people have short attention spans and won't do that.

also, i can't tell what the girl on the front is doing. where are her arms? it looks weird.

thinnerair
02-19-2007, 08:18 PM
this flyer is gonna make me have sexy seizures.

psychic friend
02-19-2007, 08:43 PM
hooochie flyer that gets deleted on myspace